It was a shock to Susan. The comfort of familiarity was lost. In the
blink of an eye what had once been Susan’s homeland was now foreign. Susan looked around at the sights and sounds,
not knowing what to do, studying her new surroundings. She was in a warehouse of sorts with a high
ceiling. The warehouse was overcrowded
and noisy. Hanging from the ceiling by
chains, were cages, some large and others small. The small cages were full of carrots, still
with their green tops. Susan was transfixed and stood on the spot, unable to
move. In the large cages were animals, although Susan had never seen this kind
of animal. They were all different, most covered in patchy fur, with some human
like features. They did have one feature in common; their teeth were bared. This
frightened Susan out of her wits and she started running and looking for an
exit to escape this freak show. What the
hell? A nervous sweat was trickling down the sides of Susan’s face and her
hands were clammy. The stench from the caged human animals was overpowering and
nausea hit Susan. Ugh!
No one took any notice of Susan
as she raced through the warehouse; except for one person. The girl had been
observing Susan. A scream escaped from Susan as the girl grabbed her on the
arm. The girl said, “Come with me now, quickly.” Susan struggled and tried to
run away. The girl firmly held on to Susan’s arm and spoke again. “You must
come with me now, I’ll help you!” Susan looked at the girl who was wearing a
black hat with the rim pulled down over her eyes, rags covering her body and an orange tinge to he skin.
“Who are you?” asked Susan. “My name’s Maggie, I know what you are going
through and I can help you. You must
come with me now!” said Maggie. May as well, shit! Maggie led Susan to a door and they left the
warehouse.
Susan’s whole body shook out of
control. “Take some deep breaths and
follow me,” said Maggie. Susan nodded in
confusion. They were in a city with tall concrete buildings, under a grey sky. Susan noticed there was no greenery; not a
tree, shrub or even a leaf in sight. The
streets were empty. Occasionally a person scurried out of one doorway and into
another. “I’m taking you to my house,”
said Maggie. “The sun will be gone soon,
so we have to hurry”. After walking for
30 minutes, Maggie started to run. Susan
kept up the pace. They circled around an
enclosure, with an 8 foot high wire fence. Behind the fence was a concrete
building with one door. Outside the building was a large concrete hole in the
ground with steep sides. Water was being
pumped out of a pipe above the hole, and the effect was that of water spiraling down a plug hole in a sink.
“Here we go,” said Maggie. The two girls had reached a harbour and Maggie
helped Susan down into a dinghy. Susan
did as she was told and Maggie rowed out into the harbour. The water was black and murky. Surely
nothing lives in this water. As
Maggie rowed, tears fell from Susan’s eyes.
This was all too much. “Let it
out Susan and I’ll fill you in, said Maggie. I’m not from here either."
I was at the local supermarket buying milk,
and in an instant, boom, I was here in this wasted city. It took me weeks to adjust and a stranger
helped me out, the same as I’m doing for you. Something is wrong with this place and no one
will talk about it. The only thing to
eat is carrots or meat, and they’re sold at the market after being dropped
there once a month through the night. The
meat comes from the animals you saw in the cages. I don’t eat them. They're mutated humans,” Maggie started to
explain. Susan’s crying turned to gags. “I’m taking you to a small island in the
middle of the harbour. I live there with
Tilda and Grandma Chicken. You’ll be
safe” said Maggie. “Well how the hell
did I get here, where am I, how can I go home?” asked Susan. “I’m so sorry” said Maggie. “You
can’t go home. I wouldn't be here if I
knew how to do that.” Maggie reached over and hugged Susan. Susan was beside herself and the tears were
running down her face. “You’ll be O.K. You’ll adjust,” said Maggie.
The two girls arrived at a small
inlet and pulled up to a wooden jetty. Maggie padlocked the dinghy to the jetty
with a heavy chain. The island wasn't really an island, but a rocky protrusion
with a building in the middle, surrounded on 3 sides by a high fence. Maggie
looked up into the sky and frowned. The ashen
sun was almost down. “Let’s get inside, hurry,
come on!” said Maggie. After knocking on
the door, it was opened by an old woman, and the girls hurried inside.
“Hey Tilda, look who I found at
the markets,” said Maggie. “Tilda,
Susan, Susan, Tilda. Yay, we have
someone else to stay with us,” said Maggie. Maggie twirled off around the room. Tilda smiled at Susan and gave her a hug. “Welcome Susan,” said the old woman. “Welcome to our home”. Susan’s gratitude came out in tears. “I’ll make us a cup of iced water,” said
Tilda. “Take a seat Susan, and please feel
at home. We’ll fill you in, you poor lost sole”. Once all three were settled, Maggie began.
“The thing is,” said Maggie. “If
you are out at night, you will disappear.
The people from behind the Great Fence will capture you. You remember the high fence we ran around on
the mainland? I've watched them at
night. They drug the prisoners and take
them behind the Great Fence”.
This must be a dream. It just keeps getting weirder and weirder.
Susan sat, listened and stared off into space. Tilda patted Susan on the arm and smiled. “The prisoners are told to walk
down the concrete spiral hole thingy, and then the water is turned on! They are washed away by a whirlpool, never to
be seen again. Deep, down into the
ground. They obviously drown,” said
Maggie.
“Now, now, Maggie,” said Tilda. “I think Susan has heard enough! Come on
love, we’ll show you round and find you a bed.”
The inside of the house looked as
normal as any middle class home, with ornaments on a sideboard and photos in
frames of people long gone. Tilda, with
tears in her eyes, spoke the names of each of the lost family members and
friends. Susan felt Tilda’s sadness and
awkwardly put an arm around Tilda’s shoulders.
At the end of the kitchen were
double glass doors. They were shut. Susan couldn't see through the glass. It was yellow, and reminded Susan of the
retro decor of the 50’s. “Come along Susan, and I’ll introduce you to
Grandma Chicken. You’ll find this hard
to deal with, but Grandma Chicken is very excited to meet you. She’s been listening to us talk.” Susan silently followed Tilda towards the
glass doors. “You’ll be fine with this Susan,” Maggie said, and gave her a
wink. Doubt it! Susan could hear a
scratching sound as the three women approached the doors. “Just don’t get too
close, she bites.”
Tilda opened the
doors and Susan saw the most hideous creature. It looked like a chicken the size of a short
person, with a head covered in not feathers, but human hair, wound up into a
bun on top of its head. The creature
looked like the ones Susan had seen in the warehouse and was baring its teeth. The
sight frightened Susan.
The big chicken lady person was
scratching the floor and making soft clucking noises. “Grandma Chicken was
rescued by Tilda from the meat markets,” said Maggie. Her feathers were falling out and she looked
scraggly. No one bought her and she was
left to rot at the back of the warehouse. It was
disgusting! We've only been able to save
this one. She can end her days here in
comfort.” Susan noticed a chicken pen
of sorts in the corner of the room, where shredded paper was scattered for
Grandma Chicken to toilet.
This was just
too much for Susan and out came the tears.
What was this horrid place? Tilda went over to Grandma Chicken and fixed a
stray piece of hair coming out of the bun.
“Grandma Chicken only lets Tilda get close to her,” said Maggie. “Oh
dear, your tears will settle down eventually, sweetie.”
“I need to show you something,”
said Tilda. Maggie was standing in another corner of the room, in front of what
looked like a large painting turned backwards. We've heard stories at the
markets, frightening stories of homes being broken into and people being
whisked away during the night, never to be seen again. The only defense we have is this mirror. Oh,
please! A mirror, a weapon? “We were
lucky to....well, find this,” said Maggie.
“Um, call me stupid but how is a
mirror going to help you?” Susan asked. “That’s
the good bit,” said Maggie. If anyone
looks in the mirror, the mirror turns a ghastly black and the person is sucked
in, and we never see them again. How
awesome is that?” Maggie twirled off
around the room again. Oh dear, get me out of here. “It’s what happens Susan, no matter how hard
it is to believe,” said Tilda. The
important thing is that you know what it can do and how it can be used. Never,
ever, turn the mirror around unless you are facing an enemy, and don’t look in
to the mirror, or poof, you’ll be gone. “Um,
O.K,” said Susan. Help!
“Come on and we’ll find you a bed,”
said Tilda. Susan was led in to a small
bedroom with a mattress on the floor. “Thank
you,” said Susan. “Try to get some sleep and we’ll
call you later for supper,” said Tilda. Susan
lay down and cried until she fell asleep.
Dreams of hideous creatures danced around inside Susan’s head.
A noise woke Susan. Susan sat up quickly and took a gulp of air. Holding her breath, she listened. Susan’s body
was stiff and motionless. Someone raced
into the bedroom. “Quick Susan,” said
Maggie. They’re here. It’s them, from behind
the Great Fence. We've got to go, now!” Maggie tugged at Susan until she got up, and
then pulled her towards the door.
“Tilda went out to stall them, so
we could get away. Come on! There’s an escape hatch in Grandma Chicken’s
room behind the wardrobe.” Susan started
to shake and followed Maggie. What
sounded like a gunshot stopped Susan and Maggie in their tracks. Susan heard a loud sob escape from Maggie. On entering Grandma Chicken’s room, Maggie
led Susan towards a wardrobe on the back wall.
The double doors suddenly opened and men with torches scanned the
room. Maggie desperately tried to drag
the wardrobe aside. “The mirror,” said
Susan. We’re too late, get the fucking mirror!”
At that moment a figure flew
through the room and landed on the man inside the doorway. Grandma Chicken was attacking him with such ferociousness
it made the other men step back. Maggie
and Susan both grabbed for the mirror when another gunshot was heard. Maggie let out another loud sob as they
watched Grandma Chicken fall to the floor. Dizziness washed over Susan and she grabbed at Maggie. Both girls lost their balance. Maggie’s
grip on the mirror loosened. A torch light
fell on the glass of the mirror as it turned and faced the girls.
It happened so fast, and both
girls looked in to the black mirror. Susan
and Maggie were sucked away and disappeared from Grandma Chicken’s room.
Oh Francine, what a horrid little story! Well done dear! Ugh, so creepy!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much for reading this story AJ. It's been in my head for a long time, and it felt wonderful to finally let it out.
ReplyDeleteOh Hmm well im glad you let this out i think, its interesting for sure ( in a creepy i do NOT want to be in your head) kinda way. Do you feel better now? I admit it did hold my interest in morbid wonderful watching a car wreck way. Lol
ReplyDeleteGrandma Chicken will be in my head for awhile. Creepy? Understatement! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Peter!
DeleteFirst time reading your work, very original, I enjoyed it very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Nariman. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
DeleteTwilight Zone creepiness, Fran. Wonderful job.
ReplyDeleteThanks Glen. I value your comments!
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